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Sunday, August 3, 2003
Books

Write view
Good ideas marred by a casual approach
Randeep Wadehra

The Romancers
by Rummy Nand Lal. Sapna Sood, Ludhiana. Pages: 208. $4 or `A33.

The RomancersTHE title conjures up the prospect of the 1960s' ‘nouveau romanciers’ fiction, characterised by shifting time sequences, interior monologue, and striking imagery, popularised in France by the likes of Michel Butor. Alas! One is soon disabused of the possibility of any such happy experience.

Lal's attempt gives the impression that fiction writing is some sort of a frivolous activity. His lackadaisical attitude towards creative writing is reflected in the entire volume. Along with the flair for writing one needs to put in hard work and take professional help before launching the final product in the market. It is like riyaaz for a classical singer — absolutely imperative before venturing to perform on the public stage.

The IGNOU conducts diploma courses in creative writing. One can also visit websites like fictionaddiction.net, absolutewrite.com and writersbureau.com that help aspiring writers hone their craft. Contrary to the popular view, short stories are the hardest to write. One can afford to be terse and cryptic in verse and expansively lucid in a novel, but a short story demands a clear plot, taut narrative and unambiguous denouement. One can learn all this and more by interacting with various writers through such institutions and websites.

 


Unfortunately, this volume fails on almost all counts. The author has some good ideas that could have been developed into interesting psychoanalytical fiction. For example, in Train Journey`85 his encounter with two women passengers has interesting possibilities. Sadly it fizzles into a tacky drawing room anecdote. The protagonist introduces himself as a much-travelled businessman. He makes an observation — irrelevant to the plot and typical of the phoren-returned — regarding overcrowded unreserved train compartments; and then plants himself in a chair car's middle seat, with two women on either side. He likes one's perfume and dislikes the other's body odour. He describes their chat without developing it into a full-fledged dialogue.

The prose is laboured and the syntax terrible. For example, on page 4, "The forces of love are so immense that it can make the dead sit-up with nodding acquaintance".

And the writer hopes to catch up with Khushwant Singh! Not that the target is unattainable, but without focused effort things can get a bit rummy for Mr Lal.

Travels to Highlands of Himachal
by K.R. Bharti. Indus, New Delhi. Pages 166. Rs 200

Travels to Highlands of HimachalAlliteration is an art and has its utility. But when one comes across phrases like 'hysterical about historical places' followed by 'rejoice in religious places'; and when the preface's first sentence ends up with "`85since the man set his foot on this planet", it takes courage to continue reading the book purporting to be a travelogue. However, persistence pays. One is rewarded with details of the topography of this beautiful hill state, along with an insight into its culture, anthropological richness and quite a bit of mythology.

The author, among other things, highlights the controversy regarding terming eunuchs as Kinners. He points out that the Kinnaur region of Himachal Pradesh derives its name from the demi-god-like mythological tribe of Kinners, said to be born out of Brahma's shadow. It finds mention in Kalidasa's Kumarsambhava and has been immortalised in the Ajanta frescos. People of the state also quote from references to this tribe in ancient texts, including the epics and the Vedas. Only Rigveda does not mention the word Kinner. Bharti refers to the evidence that substantiates the claims that the region comprising upper Satluj was called Kinnerdesh in the past.

It is not for nothing that Himachal Pradesh was once a part of the mythological Dev Lok, or the Abode of Gods.

General Science For Competitive Examinations
by C.S. Bedi and R.S. Bedi. S. Chand & Co., N. Delhi. Pages: ix+564. Rs 295.

General Science For Competitive ExaminationsCompetition has become a way of life for us, more so for the youngsters. Right from jostling for a seat in an appropriate school or college and obtaining proper education to getting the right sort of job, one has to compete with one's peers. It is a tough game and only the best come out winners. Apart from one's curriculum a student has to imbibe general knowledge too. And science is an essential part of such knowledge.

Some like to thoroughly study their chosen subjects, but most kids prefer the shortcut, viz., guides, academies etc. They seem to be one with the British novelist and art historian, Anita Brookner, who once remarked, "In real life, of course, it is the hare who wins. Every time. Look around you. And in any case it is my contention that Aesop was writing for the tortoise market`85 Hares have no time to read. They are too busy winning the game."

If you agree with her then this book is for you. It covers all the topics that could possibly be of use in a competitive exam. However, do remember one thing. No matter how swift hares are, their stamina and lifespan are only a fraction of those of tortoises. And I firmly believe in the dictum that one who laughs last, laughs the loudest.