In this work we find the same
trend. Some of the poems compiled in this book are superb in
their diction and meaning like the ghazal on page 52
beginning with the stanza:
Aaiyinai hi
saamne aane se katrane lage
Sachch kaha to
aap bhi jhooti kasam khane lage
The ghazal on
page 47 shows the angst, the anxiety, of a modern man:
Khushboo ke aas
pass hein kuchchh aur log bhi
Meri taranh
uddas hein kuchchh aur log bhi
Shayad hakikton
ne sab kuchchh badl diya
Sapnon mein
badhavaas hein kuchh aur log bhi
Behtar hei apne
aap ko rakhiye zameen par
Majbooriyon
mein khass hein kuchchh aur log bhi
The poem,
written in blank verse, with the title of Birwa Tulsi Ka is
composed with deep devotion to the tulsi (basil) plant
and is surcharged with intimate emotions of love. The blank
verse Desh is written in a patriotic vein.
Aadmi beshak
bara hai
Aadmi aadhar
hai
Aadmi se hi
bani duniya
Bana sansar hai
Aadmi ka aadmi
se
Abb yehi
sandesh hai
Aadmi se hai
bara koi
Tau phir veh
desh hai.
The poem on
page 51 shows man in bondage even at the dawn of freedom. Every
country, every nation boasts of giving freedom and rights to its
citizens but in actual practice every good citizen, except
politicians and those at the helm of power and is in chains
authority. This poem gives the real picture of a modern ‘free’
citizen.
Yeh kaisi azadi
hai
Sab ke munh par
tala dekh
Sachch kahne ki
jurrat kar
Apna
desh-nikala dekh
The 28 poems
written in blank verse and superior in thought to materical and
rhyming verses. It seems he can express his emotions better in
free verse than in other poems. This work has established him as
a modern Hindi poet, writing in the Urdu tradition of modern
poetry. There are a few compositions which excel in expressions
and meaning. The most remarkable of them is the ghazal on
page 19, the four stanzas of which are matchless;
Dil mein hardam
chubhne wala kanta sahi salamat de
Ankein de ya
mat de lekin sapna sahi salamat de
Hamein yuddh,
atank, bhookh se mari dharti bakshi hei
Aane wali piri
ko tau duniya sahi salamat de
Tukre-tukre
mein jeene ka matlab marna hota hei
Bujhe chiragon
ki kismat mein jalwa sahi salamat de
Bachche bhi ab
kehl rahein khatarnak hathiaron se
Bachchpan ki bagiya ka koi
guriya sahi salamat de.
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